• roknsrf posted a new activity comment 1 year, 11 months ago

    In reply to: Jerel_Damon wrote a new post, Estranged Mission A retired CIA agent is recruited to takedown a terrorist operating as a beauty queen on a mission to kill a US presidential candidate proposing a “clean energy i […] View

    Very well concieved storyline with classic strory structure for this genre. Clear and concise characters, and an overall marketable script. For my detailed review, please check your inbox.

  • Flesh and roknsrf are now friends 2 years, 2 months ago

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 2 months ago

    In reply to: Kevin_Blake posted an update Hello, everybody! View

    Very good, I really like the work you’ve done here.

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 3 months ago

    In reply to: geds625 wrote a new post, Soldier of Tomorrow When a female ex-military operative awakens to discover she has been transformed into a cyborg by scientists, she uses her new powers to retaliate. View

    well written logline

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 3 months ago

    In reply to: raydavenport wrote a new post, Alice in Boogie Wonderland Set in the Black American 70’s, an aspiring Disco dancer named Alice falls into a deep sleep into Boogie Wonderland. View

    Awesome idea Ray, I friggin love it.

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 3 months ago

    In reply to: raydavenport wrote a new post, Legal Technicality Four high school film students; Amanda, Todd, Kristie and Kyle are being haunted by a strange woman; Edelsen who just so happened to be their new high school […] View

    Correction, it’s in the “About Us” menu and then look at past winners, then 2014, then scriptfest.

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 3 months ago

    In reply to: raydavenport wrote a new post, Legal Technicality Four high school film students; Amanda, Todd, Kristie and Kyle are being haunted by a strange woman; Edelsen who just so happened to be their new high school […] View

    It’s all in the Blog section, go into the blog menu and look under 2014 winners.

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 3 months ago

    In reply to: raydavenport wrote a new post, Legal Technicality Four high school film students; Amanda, Todd, Kristie and Kyle are being haunted by a strange woman; Edelsen who just so happened to be their new high school […] View

    I checkout the comments nightly, and follow as much as I can. In fact, I just finished reading and commenting on Revolving Roscoe, so I’m around. In answer to your question, this contest may not be fixed but it certainly doesn’t follow it’s own rules. The script that came in 2nd wasn’t posted until way after the deadline. Don’t get me wrong, the…[Read more]

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 3 months ago

    In reply to: raydavenport wrote a new post, Legal Technicality Four high school film students; Amanda, Todd, Kristie and Kyle are being haunted by a strange woman; Edelsen who just so happened to be their new high school […] View

    I like the whole idea of this concept. I think it could be a great script judging from your previous work. Can’t wait to read it.

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 3 months ago

    In reply to: Apriljmiller wrote a new post, Revolving Roscoe Something is not right at Shady Oaks. A wing has disappeared and windows are blacked out. Worse is the new director, a throw-back to 1940’s Germany. When Roy […] View

    I really loved this story and had a great time reading it. So many laughs, and so many fun scenes. I think you have a great foundation for what will be a great script. Roy is a superb protagonist, and Bronquest as the antagonist is priceless. So many great scenes, quality characters and of course, Roscoe to steal the show.
    There are a number of…[Read more]

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 3 months ago

    In reply to: orenweitz wrote a new post, The Accidental Angel An 18-year-old boy is predestined to save the world. To do so, he will have to prove he was born as a human angel, and find the strength to grow his wings once […] View

    Sounds like a very interesting story and I like the hook, but as a logline you have to figure out how to say the same thing in far fewer words. One sentence is best, and some say less than 25 words. 2 sentences at most and 40 words tops. Hence the 3 overall. I would definitely like to read the script. You can send it to roknsrf@gmail.com

  • ltherapy and roknsrf are now friends 2 years, 3 months ago

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 4 months ago

    In reply to: roknsrf wrote a new post, Oh, for the Love of Mike A rudderless Gulf War veteran gets a bump when he befriends a youth in need of a mentor, but in order to make good on his new commitments he must shed his old […] View

    Anyone can read this screenplay at http://www.roknsrf.com

  • roknsrf posted an update 2 years, 4 months ago

    To all my friends here, I just completed my webpage http://www.roknsrf.com It contains the bulk of my work so far. Feel free to check it out

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago

    In reply to: raydavenport wrote a new post, Condominium Suite 1309 Martin Cooper and his family moves to Miami into condominium suite 1309 only to find that it is haunted by it’s dark past residences. View

    Honestly Ray, they’re two completely different kinds of horror scripts. Hostel X is so creepy in a very sickening kind of way. It makes one feel as if they know they should not be watching this but just can’t look away, if you get my meaning. It’s real life horror because it requires no suspension of disbelief. It could really happen. I think if I…[Read more]

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago

    In reply to: SeanKeyter wrote a new post, “Bodies in the bush” Whatʼs more important, protecting a species from being poached to extinction or human life? The movie is about a blood thirsty and ruthless bush conflict […] View

    Sorry, this is not a logline.

  • roknsrf posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago

    In reply to: raydavenport wrote a new post, Oscar A young barn Swallow named Oscar whose afraid of heights must learn how to fly to go south before the winter to rejoin his family. View

    Your photo is of a young Sand Martin, which is a member of the Swallow family, but a Barn Swallow has blue coloring on the top of it’s head, back, and wings

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