• raindjs posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago

    In reply to: raindjs wrote a new post, Checking Out, Checking In A successful but disillusioned reality TV producer loses his shows, his wife, his car and his father in one week, causing him to Check Out of life and Check In […] View

    Thanks much for the kind words. I’m glad you enjoyed the script. Your suggestions about the ending are great, and you’re right, the length was what kept me from going there. Now I want to add exactly that.

    Thanks again- praise is hard to come by, so it’s appreciated.

    David

  • raindjs posted a new activity comment 2 years, 10 months ago

    In reply to: wovalle wrote a new post, Sole Captain A disturbed man’s mysterious past must be unlocked in time to save the life of his nine year-old son, whom he’s abducted to the high seas in search of an uncharted island. View

    I rally enjoyed Sole Captain. It was a fun read that I did in one sitting because it drew me in right away and I wanted to see how it turned out. It reminded me of Brilliant Mind but without the sinister overtones. Cap’s tragic psychology nearly killed his child and ruined his life, yet the story wound up on a positive note while taking the…[Read more]

  • A successful but disillusioned reality TV producer loses his shows, his wife, his car and his father in one week, causing him to Check Out of life and Check In to a nursing home at age 36. While there, he finds […]

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