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    In reply to: meberinger wrote a new post, Dry A prohibition-era woman seeks to add some excitement to her house-bound life, and becomes a rum-runner in the process, all while keeping her police officer husband in the dark. […] View

    Thank you for your feedback. Some of your comments made good points. Could you be more specific about your formatting concerns? I followed the standards laid out in my screenwriting class and textbooks, but you’re not the first to say that my professor was perhaps a little out of touch.

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    In reply to: warden67 wrote a new post, Seven Years After A terrorist attack on a city, built to protect the remnants of society from cannibalistic infected, separates a man and his young niece. With the help of three Marines […] View

    A great script, though I had one major problem.

    You write in a very prose-like style, with lots of description and details. It’s great for a novel, or if you’re just reading the script, but directors might shy away from your screenplay because it seems like you’ve done all the work for them. They want to be able to imagine their own costumes…[Read more]

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    In reply to: lullaby wrote a new post, The Curse Louis dating Pamela, she is the daughter of an industrialist, who is against their relationship, because he is poor He sends a security guard to kill Louis. He says to bury […] View

    As the other commenter said- it’s almost impossible to read, and definitely not in anything close to an industry standard format. This isn’t a screenplay at all really, but it could be a novel or book of poetry if you want. It’s not unsalvageable.

    One other thing: I’m a little concerned by how violent Wolf is with women. Might be a good idea to…[Read more]

  • meberinger posted a new activity comment 2 years, 9 months ago

    In reply to: DaveTroop wrote a new post, Sex and Violins An attractive secretary’s romantic hopes are continuously shattered due to her unusual reaction to a certain classical instrument. View

    Loving the cute, funny concept. I wish the characters were a little more fleshed out- Jackie especially. Show us why these men fall in love with her (until the violins). Otherwise this is an amazing little story and I would love to see it produced.

  • Hey, feel free to rate my screenplay Dry without reading the whole thing. It’s a little long, but the first ten pages are really supposed to reel people in, so please let me know how you feel about them!

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  • A prohibition-era woman seeks to add some excitement to her house-bound life, and becomes a rum-runner in the process, all while keeping her police officer husband in the dark. Shenanigans ensue.

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