• Mariela posted a new activity comment 3 years, 2 months ago

    In reply to: SplitLocked wrote a new post, Leveling An emotionally vacant criminal attempts to solve the murder of a popular TV news reporter when the detectives put in charge of the case prove themselves incompetent. View

    My first question that the log line doesn’t seem to answer is… why? Why suddenly would emotionally vacant criminal be getting involved? And because the log line doesn’t reveal it, my mind automatically goes to cliches. I do see the potential for great action and other “fun & games” scenes in a story like this, however.

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