• malakas commented on the post, Crash Pad 4 years, 7 months ago

    yeah too bad that kind of humor like NEVER sells.

  • malakas commented on the post, The Screener 4 years, 7 months ago

    thanks! look forward to your thoughts. and FWIW it makes fun of objectivication more than it glorifies it, but anywho.

  • malakas commented on the post, Firewatch 4 years, 9 months ago

    Like my dear old dad always said, “If you can’t say something nice…”

  • Great concept built on a compelling story line. IMO Russian Mafia plot lines are vastly under-represented in the over all popular mafia genre. It also harnesses the relatable element of “once you try to get out, […]

  • malakas commented on the post, Crash Pad 4 years, 9 months ago

    Thanks! Ha, not sure about a sequel, although I’ve contemplated a “prequel” chronicling the life of the up and coming main characters prior to that point. Its securely on the back burner for now but something to […]

  • Thanks for the feedback. The original logline had a follow on sentenence leading into the conflict but everyone suggested I chop it. What I should have done was rewrote it better and left it in. I see what you […]

  • malakas commented on the post, Crash Pad 4 years, 10 months ago

    Giggity!

  • malakas commented on the post, Crash Pad 4 years, 10 months ago

    Thank you! If you could review it in the star rating section I’d appreciate it!

  • malakas commented on the post, Crash Pad 4 years, 10 months ago

    Thanks so much! If you have time could you please review it in the stars section? Thanks!

  • malakas commented on the post, Crash Pad 4 years, 10 months ago

    Thanks for the slam bro. Its clear you don’t like these kinds of movies. More power to you. But they do quite well in the marketplace, I can assure you. And this one has won several awards and counting in major […]

  • malakas commented on the post, Crash Pad 4 years, 10 months ago

    Thanks for the technical corrections. FWIW, I know more than one over 30 year old “serial masturbators”. Its really not that rare. YMMV. And have you ever been to Dublin? All you see are Liverpool and ManU […]

  • I didn’t think there was any way a good script could come out of this concept/logline but I was surprised. This was actually very well written. Several reviewers have judged it on its morality or whatever but I […]

  • Thanks! Yeah its definately an edgy R rated comedy, but its also very redeeming in its resolution. It initially appears like its glorifying debauchery, but as the watcher/reader goes along with the journey he/she […]

  • malakas commented on the post, The Screener 5 years ago

    Thanks! Yeah, it originally had a second sentenence that everyone sugested be deleted, probably because it was a bit too wordy. Rather than deleting it though, I should have shortened and sharpened it because […]

  • malakas commented on the post, The Screener 5 years ago

    Thanks! Yeah its pretty balls out, although technically if it was shot as scripted the budget would be on the medium to slightly high side. That could be changed with just a few minor tweaks to some higher price […]

  • malakas commented on the post, The Screener 5 years ago

    LOL thanks! That’s the goal for the movie (well in this case screenplay)!

    Regarding the female appeal, while there is sex in it of course, I don’t think too many women feel threatened or insulted by the […]

  • malakas commented on the post, The Screener 5 years ago

    Thanks! I see what you mean about making it “hookier”. It probably needs the second line reinstated but modified to pimp the main conflict a bit.

  • malakas commented on the post, The Screener 5 years ago

    Thanks! Hope you can give the screenplay a read.

  • malakas commented on the post, The Screener 5 years ago

    Thanks! While it does “come off as sexist” the main points of it in the end are that:

    1. only some girls are objectified in that manner,
    2. only by some guys
    3. while many guys think that’s cool, there is a […]

  • malakas commented on the post, The Screener 5 years ago

    Thanks! Although I didn’t fullyc apture the conflict/growth acr potential in the logline it definately gets the hook/concept/setting out there. Hope you can give the screenplay a read!

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