• KelvinT posted a new activity comment 2 years, 6 months ago

    In reply to: KelvinT wrote a new post, THE EVEREST A guru with issues View

    Hi Roknrsf

    Thanks for getting back to me and taking the time to highlight areas within my screenplay that need improvement. That said, I will take your feedback into consideration and review my screenplay accordingly. Just wondering, have you entered through the Page Awards contest in the past and have they given you good feedback? Many thanks.

  • KelvinT posted a new activity comment 2 years, 6 months ago

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    Hi Roknrsf. Thank you for taking the time to read and give feedback for my screenplay.

    In response to your comments, the main focus of the story is primarily on Robert’s and Timothy’s journey, which is why most of core character development was centred on these two characters. That being said, I have tried to flesh out the roles of the other…[Read more]

  • KelvinT posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago

    In reply to: 1rainman1 wrote a new post, Time Skippers The discovery of a fossilized alien pinned under a brontosaur bone, sends a baffled paleontologist and a reckless UFO enthusiast on an inter-dimensional journey to save the world. View

    Jurassic Park crossed with 2001 space Odyssey?

  • KelvinT posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago

    Screenplay updated :)

  • KelvinT posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago

    In reply to: Shaman_Elizabeth wrote a new post, EARTH SENTINELS: THE STORM CREATORS A fallen angel forms an alliance with shamans, totem animals and people affected by manmade environmental disasters to protect the planet, but […] View

    Earth Sentinels is very well written screenplay that evokes strong imagery from the concise description of scenes used. The screenplay also has a very strong message at its core.

  • KelvinT posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago

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    Thank you for your feedback! I am in the process of updating the screenplay so I will definitely take your comments into consideration before I re-upload it. Many thanks :)

  • KelvinT posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago

    In reply to: JPachuski wrote a new post, Babies With Rabies Adam and Lucy are a young couple struggling with the decision of increasing their family by one. The decision, already scary for Adam, gets more complicated when a […] View

    Very creative plot. Hilarious throughout and definitely a page turner. There were a few grammatical errors but did not detract from the overall experience.

  • KelvinT posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago

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    Thank for the feedback MrChips!!

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