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    In reply to: JPachuski wrote a new post, Babies With Rabies Adam and Lucy are a young couple struggling with the decision of increasing their family by one. The decision, already scary for Adam, gets more complicated when a […] View

    Thanks for reading the script! If you had some time or you took any notes while reading the script, could you point out some examples of where the story structure and dialogue were poorly executed for you? It would help with future drafts of the script. Thanks!

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    In reply to: JPachuski wrote a new post, Babies With Rabies Adam and Lucy are a young couple struggling with the decision of increasing their family by one. The decision, already scary for Adam, gets more complicated when a […] View

    Glad you enjoyed it! Making Adam a die hard giants fan was bound to polarize some but I rest soundly at night knowing that none of my characters will ever be cowboys fans! Thanks again for taking the time to read it.

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    In reply to: meberinger wrote a new post, Dry A prohibition-era woman seeks to add some excitement to her house-bound life, and becomes a rum-runner in the process, all while keeping her police officer husband in the dark. […] View

    Hey Mary,

    I just read through “Dry” and enjoyed the ride. I have some notes and feedback. I’ll leave some of my main thoughts here and if you have any further questions I’ll be happy to answer them.

    I really like the opening countdown to prohibition and thought it was a good way to kick things off. The dialogue was smooth throughout,…[Read more]

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    In reply to: JPachuski wrote a new post, Babies With Rabies Adam and Lucy are a young couple struggling with the decision of increasing their family by one. The decision, already scary for Adam, gets more complicated when a […] View

    Thanks! I’m glad you liked it so far and hopefully you enjoy the ending.

  • Adam and Lucy are a young couple struggling with the decision of increasing their family by one. The decision, already scary for Adam, gets more complicated when a sterile, jilted, scientist infects the city’s baby population and has them dancing to his tune. Adam and Lucy must overcome the baby apocalypse and rediscover their strength and love in each other.

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