What a rock is
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What a rock is

A young boy, who struggles to understand the importance of imagination, is aided by a strange man who teaches him how to escape reality into the world of fantasy.

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    1. Profile photo of marrow
      marrow says
      August 11, 2015, 10:48 am
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      Good potential .

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    2. roknsrf says
      April 24, 2015, 11:59 pm
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      Good story potential, but the lack of understanding the importance of imagination as a antag concept is a hard sell. The hook has promise, but together they need a struggle to overcome, for it to be complete.

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    3. Profile photo of williamhproductions@gmail.com
      April 22, 2015, 9:51 pm

      Has plenty of potential

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