Unconditional Love
User Rating:
VN:RO [1.9.17_1161]
Overall
Concept
Story Structure
Character
Dialogue
Grammar
Budget (1-Low / 5-High)
Rating: 2.9/5 (2 votes cast)

Unconditional Love

A woman who has devoted her life to helping others questions the purpose of her life after her dog is brutally killed.

3 Comments

Leave A Reply
  1. hingylingy says
    July 17, 2013, 12:46 am
    Overall
    Concept
    Story Structure
    Character
    Dialogue
    Grammar
    Budget (1-Low / 5-High)

    Excellent story…heartfelt and full of emotion.
    I could not help but feel even more for your characters because I happen to be Greek.

    The courtroom scenes and flash backs were well done.

    Good job.

    Jay

    VN:F [1.9.17_1161]
    Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
    Report user
  2. Profile photo of Kman
    Kman says
    July 13, 2013, 1:08 am
    Overall
    Concept
    Story Structure
    Character
    Dialogue
    Grammar
    Budget (1-Low / 5-High)

    A lot of thought went into this script – the attention to detail. Thirty pages into the script, Alexia is as familiar as an old friend. Occasionally there are lapses in grammar, spelling and formatting.
    The emotion is overwhelming. I sank deeper and deeper throughout the story. By the end, I had to hold back the tears.
    There are moments when the writing shows a naivete and immaturity about legal proceedings.
    Work at it. This script should get someone’s attention.

    VN:F [1.9.17_1161]
    Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
    Report user
    • Profile photo of Argent
      Argent says
      July 15, 2013, 11:22 pm

      Thank you for your honest & constructive comments. Unfortunately just before I submitted this screenplay I had transferred all my files to a new computer & the screenplay software I had written this on did not transfer well. I was faced with trying to “fix” it as well as I could & sending it with errors in format, grammar, etc. (I worked far into the night trying to re-type it as a PDF file) or not submitting it at all.
      As my first attempt at writing a screenplay at the coaxing of a friend who does & felt I had a story to tell that would get a message across as well as stir people’s emotions, I am very happy to read that at least I was successful in that regard.
      I will take your suggestions & comments and work on “polishing” this screenplay as I do feel it has a powerful message we can all benefit from.

      VN:F [1.9.17_1161]
      Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
      Report user

Leave a Reply

You must be logged in to post a comment.