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THE WITCHING HOUR

Five teenagers summon the ghost of an 18th century witch and she possesses one of the teens and she starts killing off the others.

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  1. Profile photo of RutgerOosterhoff
    October 2, 2015, 8:07 am

    You start your first page with FADE IN:
    If the pros don’t use FADE IN, I don’t care. This is a spec!!

    “The forest” is as dense as your first page.

    … Not for me.

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      BruceD says
      October 2, 2015, 8:23 am

      Thanks for your comments. I just wanted to write
      an entertaining horror script. It’s based on an urban legend
      that I encountered as a teenager. Cheers!

      Bruce

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        October 2, 2015, 9:34 am

        Maybe I’m a bit harsh, but this is a hard business. The rest of your screenplay the format looks fine and there is enough white space. Just try to split up your sentences on the first page. A max of for lines per paragraph.

        Going to read the first ten pages and tell you what I think.

        PS: cut the last ‘white page’ from your script.

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    October 1, 2015, 12:17 pm

    i was reading the longline and thinking is this the blair witch project and it was

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