The Wait
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The Wait

After years of failed relationships, an independent 40 year- old business woman swore’s off dating and sex after reading ”The Wait” but she reconnects with an old friend who is seeing his ex.

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    1. Profile photo of asgardian
      asgardian says
      July 20, 2017, 12:25 am
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      Add another dimension to the woman’s arc and you have an interesting story.

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    2. July 2, 2017, 2:27 pm
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      It may have teeth. I always think reawakening stories are good. Sounds like you’re going for dramorous, as I like to call humor and drama.

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      June 28, 2017, 8:09 pm

      i like it

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      June 28, 2017, 8:08 pm
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      Very good

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    5. Profile photo of bellowriter
      June 12, 2017, 5:44 pm
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      Too contemporary

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