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The Twins We Didn’s Want

It is a story about twins who are being chased by the government for crimes that they committed years ago. They have the powers to explode and implode, but they are incapable of controlling it.

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  1. katiedon says
    January 20, 2016, 11:59 am
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    Overall I liked the story. However, it does need to be rewritten in a few areas.

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  2. July 15, 2015, 6:09 pm
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    It looks so sweat logline. I love it! :) Good luck to you!

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  3. roknsrf says
    May 13, 2015, 11:39 pm
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    This is the wrong forum for this. Yours is more of a short play script. and should not be here

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