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The Tales of Launcelot: The Knight Who Sacked Guinevere

A re-telling of Arthurian Legend about Sir Launcelot and his affair with the Queen of Camelot, Guinevere.

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    October 5, 2015, 5:00 pm
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    when i saw the word sacked i thought it was football

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  2. January 8, 2015, 2:03 pm
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    This is difficult to judge because it’s not written as a script, but as a novel with scene and character headers. The great bulk of the writing is about things that are not shown or heard, such as when the author writes about the history of town.

    The dialog is very good and appropriate for the time. However, there are numerous instructions for the actor to speak in a foreign dialect, but no indication how the viewers would understand what is being said.

    The author needs to pay attention to how things could actually occur, for example he has Sir Launcelot giving a long dialog to his troops while galloping on a horse… a rather difficult feat.

    The paragraphs are extremely long. It’s recommended that action paragraphs be no more than 4 lines.

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