The Superzero
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The Superzero

A teenager charges a boy ten bucks for saving him from two bullies

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    1. Profile photo of james341980
      March 14, 2017, 3:10 pm
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      sometimes its good to keep it short and sweet, but in this situation more detail is needed

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    2. Salena17 says
      September 25, 2016, 7:49 pm
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      Ok

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    3. lilcece7 says
      September 24, 2016, 5:59 pm
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      It could be a good movie.. but its puts out that the teenager’s a bully also by charging the kid ten bucks.

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    4. recluse says
      September 22, 2016, 11:42 am
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      can be a low budget feature

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    5. September 22, 2016, 1:27 am

      The logline can be a good story but it’s short and a little vague.

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    6. bicylord says
      September 21, 2016, 11:29 pm
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      Great potential.

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