The Red Empire
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The Red Empire

The story of a renegade Martian and his struggle to unite the Red and Blue Planets

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    1. October 15, 2016, 9:43 am
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      I agree with @brian this could be amazing. Don’t give up. Change your pic it’s boring mate.

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    2. Brian says
      November 26, 2015, 8:34 pm
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      Interesting concept with lots of potential. For me, there isn’t enough information. Renegade Martian gets me; but what are red and blue planets. I so want to know more.

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      November 20, 2015, 3:35 am
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      Not really interesting, but this genre has its audience. Develop the logline a bit more.

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      Evand22 says
      August 13, 2015, 5:30 pm
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      Interesting

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