The Other Side of Innocence
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The Other Side of Innocence

When an idealistic man’s beautiful daughter goes missing he wages war with our complicated legal system and smug murderers in his searing quest for the complete truth.

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    1. February 13, 2016, 12:11 pm
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      Could be onto a winner. Sounds really good

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      geds625 says
      June 5, 2015, 11:17 am
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      interesting!

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      January 16, 2015, 8:38 am
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      Good idea, but I think it would require some originality, as it does sound like a film made too many times already. Good luck!

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      • bajasarah says
        January 27, 2015, 11:01 pm

        Thank you so much. There are some twists and turns and legendary legal characters and some Broke Back Mountain type story lines…it is a work in progress and I am so grateful for the feed
        back!!!!!!!!!!!

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    4. cla777 says
      November 22, 2014, 6:58 pm
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      I would definitely watch this movie about the love a parent has for his child. Good thriller.

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      Keysieboy says
      November 6, 2014, 5:16 am
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      Sounds a really interesting plot would love to see the finished product.

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    6. toojazzy says
      October 10, 2014, 9:45 am

      The log line says “she disappears” but a few words later it says “her smug murderers”. Might want to adjust it a bit, (she disappears but her body found) etc.

      complicated legal system? Is this a Native American (Hawaiian) legal system working with or against the traditional American legal system? I know Native American tribes have a form of sovereignity within the reservation land. Might want to clarify the complicated legal system.

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      • bajasarah says
        October 11, 2014, 10:20 pm

        I guess questions are good?

        They never found her body,managed to get an indictment for murder without one. Which is very rare. They called a legendary legal character out of retirement for the case. Did they get the conviction?

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      DeeDee says
      October 9, 2014, 6:54 pm
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      I can see the draw but it sounds closer to about 100 films already done. Good luck with this logline.

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      • bajasarah says
        October 9, 2014, 7:54 pm

        Thank you DeeDee
        The Other Side of Innocence tells the tragic, true story of how the bright skies over Maui in 1977 were obscured by the darkest of clouds for twenty-year-old Lynn Bradford and how a loving father dedicated three decades of his life to ensuring the memory of his beautiful daughter is not mocked by the blind workings of a forgetful justice system. Told with a nod to the Hawaiian tradition of “talking story,” Lynn’s story is recounted through the testimony of legendary legal characters and magnificent police work (with a fraction of the resources of today), on its twisting and turning way to what can only be called a bittersweet conclusion.

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    8. bajasarah says
      October 9, 2014, 6:07 pm
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      like

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