The Hunger
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The Hunger

A small airplane rapidly descends; moments before an inevitable crash. Smoke fills the sky behind its’ burning propeller. Kris, a young, Thai epidemiologist, consumed by the recent death of his mother, has returned to her village to study a mysterious plant disease that has been making the local farmers sick. His father, a man whose inability to control his inner demons broke the bond the two once shared many years ago, mysteriously walks into his campsite asking for a second chance. Hearing the scream of both man and machine, Kris and his father look up. Black smoke swirls through the trees. Branches break. Forest monkeys scatter. Impact.

A lonely forest is about to become the battlefield for the dead and the soon to be.

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  1. Profile photo of davejgustafson
    August 13, 2013, 12:24 am
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    Good story. Runs a little long. Maybe if you got it down to 100 pages. Also the grammar is off in spots. The dialogue is a bit generic. Real people would have quirks and mistakes in their fright. Most of your characters are cool and calm under this horrendous situation. Thanks.

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