The Hideout
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The Hideout

When a nuclear apocalypse destroys most of the world, the United States is invaded.  One small group of survivors decides to fight back.

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    rattycat says
    August 15, 2013, 4:19 pm
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    rattycat says
    August 15, 2013, 4:03 pm

    First of all it’s too short and the narrative too long. In many areas the dialogue is verbose. Don’t give camera angles or over direction, movie director’s hate that. Words are mispelled or totally left out. Confusing in many areas like, Homer is shot twice in the back and he’s okay? Throwing a knife into a knife? Spacing is poorly done.

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