The H.O.A.
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The H.O.A.

Katie McAlister is a free spirit that’s always had big ideas, but zero ambition. That all changes when she decides to end the tyrannical reign of an old rival as head of the homeowner’s association, who also happens to be the wife of her husband’s new boss.

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    1. Echaka95 says
      June 5, 2017, 6:41 pm
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      Iove it! I think maybe develop the idea more? What is the protagonist goal?

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      Halling86 says
      January 19, 2016, 3:29 pm
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      I like it! Great concept. Sounds like it could be a funny movie. What is the H.O.A? Is there ny other title that´s more clear for a bigger audience?

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      September 9, 2015, 7:57 am
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      You don’t have to use a name in a logline. The logline is a bit long but it tells the story. Try to get the logline (at least) under 40 words. There seem to be a lot possibilities for character grows!

      Great hook!

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