The Diablo Ring
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The Diablo Ring

When the Diablo ring, a powerful relic forged by God after casting Adam and Eve from the Garden of Eden, surfaces in 2015, a young minister and 4 resurrected humans must unite to protect its chosen bearer and foil Lucifer’s plans.

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      ramyasri says
      August 9, 2016, 6:13 am
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      Story has potential

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      nezrik says
      January 21, 2016, 10:26 am
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      Interesting enough to rate it. Has potential.

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      September 8, 2015, 12:22 am
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      I love it, it has potential!

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    4. September 7, 2015, 10:50 am
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      Pretty good

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    5. September 6, 2015, 9:45 pm
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      That’s pretty good. I’m interested in reading it. Did you submit it to the contest? I also like how you made it one fluid logline.

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      • Rod_Mosby says
        September 7, 2015, 5:50 pm

        Thanks for the input. No, I didn’t submit it to the contest. I wrote a 5 part plot from the exposition to the denouement.

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