The Accidental Angel
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Rating: 3.7/5 (6 votes cast)

The Accidental Angel

An 18-year-old boy is predestined to save the world. To do so, he will have to prove he was born as a human angel, and find the strength to grow his wings once again. But becoming a human angel and saving the world comes with the price of unrequited love and unearthing more family secrets.

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      DEEPA says
      October 23, 2016, 9:46 am
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      good and interesting

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      ramyasri says
      August 9, 2016, 6:16 am
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      Interesting

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      Fivetone says
      April 17, 2016, 3:21 pm
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      Great movie idea

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      Lorna says
      August 21, 2015, 5:17 pm
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      Great idea for a story!

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    5. July 9, 2015, 5:14 am
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      Nice logline and I can feel that as much as you try, some can’t be made shorter. Best of luck! Would be glad if you went through my logline & synopsis for “THE PERFECT EPILOGUE” and the first page of “A place called Eden”. Your ratings and ideas are welcome

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    6. roknsrf says
      July 5, 2015, 8:53 pm
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      Sounds like a very interesting story and I like the hook, but as a logline you have to figure out how to say the same thing in far fewer words. One sentence is best, and some say less than 25 words. 2 sentences at most and 40 words tops. Hence the 3 overall. I would definitely like to read the script. You can send it to roknsrf@gmail.com

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      BruceD says
      July 5, 2015, 8:32 am

      It’s somewhat long for a logline but the story seems very interesting.

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      • orenweitz says
        July 5, 2015, 8:38 am

        Thanks BruceD! It is a bit long, but I’m glad to hear you find it interesting. I changed the logline so many times, but somehow couldn’t make it shorter without feeling I’m missing something.

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