Stand Up Comedians!
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Stand Up Comedians!

When the new American government forbids humor, a briljant stand-up comedian must overthrow the iron rulers and bring back laughter before the Thought Police humor washes the population.

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      mrb1707 says
      September 28, 2017, 4:58 am
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      Sounds and interesting story . I think it has potential

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      vp81955 says
      April 22, 2016, 2:19 pm
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      This could do to the dystopian genre what the “Scary Movie” series did to horror (especially if you found an equivalent to those films’ Anna Faris — that is, a Jennifer Lawrence with joke-telling powers). Such movies are ripe for parody, and “Stand Up Comedians!” (how about adding a comma after “Up”?) could do just that. Love the concept of deflating “The Hunger Games” and their ilk.

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      says
      March 4, 2016, 4:10 pm
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      Sounds good. You will need fix briljant . Also work on the sentence construction.

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    4. December 17, 2015, 1:37 am
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      It looks like a perfect idea on the silver screen. Good luck to you.

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    5. JCMercer says
      September 1, 2015, 10:09 pm
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      You might want to take out; “In a”, “and his group of clumsy clowns”, They are words you don’t need:)

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      SeanKeyter says
      May 12, 2015, 6:58 am
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