Sellers’ Market
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Sellers’ Market

Fed up with the stiff regulations preventing people from getting the organs they need, Dr. Andrea Sellers dives into the seedy world of the black organ trade.

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    1. Profile photo of RutgerOosterhoff
      April 29, 2015, 4:55 am
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      …. to do what?

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    2. SW63 says
      December 24, 2014, 11:23 am
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      All you have done is give us the premise of the story – Black market organ trade.

      You did not tell us that she steals from the dead – it is implied that she deals with living donors as Toojazzy suggests.

      If she is confronted by a criminal gang – that should be in the logline!

      To be honest though – it doesn’t grab me at all. Not big on ethics is it? Do you have a “House” scene at the end of each episode where the happy patient thanks the doctor for saving their life with a new organ and everyone is all smiles?

      CSI (insert city here) has lots of dead bodies to cut up every show and they catch the bad guy…

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    3. toojazzy says
      November 29, 2014, 3:37 pm

      Good Title….Interesting, I would def watch it. Might want to consider something along the lines of conning impoverished people out of their organs …. Rather than stiff regulations. A conniving scheming taking advantage of people sounds more sinister than federal regulations

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        kccarmea says
        November 29, 2014, 11:43 pm

        I think you misunderstand. She is TIRED of the federal regulations so she takes matters into her own hands by diving into the black organ trade. Black organ trade is not federally regulated. And she is not an evil person but she does steal organs from the dead after she teams up with a mortician. This gets the attention of the evil organ procurers who are angry that she is treading on their territory. As the season progresses she will meet new allies and eventually have to confront these other “organ brokers” who want her dead. Think of Breaking Bad.

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      BushyBooo says
      November 29, 2014, 2:56 am
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      It sounds dangerous. Would love to watch it cuz its my type- crime and mystery.
      Good luck

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