Run with the Big Dogs
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Run with the Big Dogs

A young house dog who doesn’t know how to fight or growl in search for a new home must first learn to survive the streets and run with the big dogs.

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      January 31, 2016, 9:46 pm
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      Needs better wording and punctuation. If there’s a further twist/complication, then there’s a story here.

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    2. December 17, 2015, 1:34 am
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      A sweet idea :)

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