Romantic surgery
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Romantic surgery

After 5 years of marriage, the struggling couple, Bruce and Anna decided to exchange their sex organs by
Surgery operation

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      Pasquali says
      July 24, 2015, 2:48 pm
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      I agree with jfs 15. You need to present the reason why they are doing this. Still, it seems really far-fetched that a couple would do this. However, if this is some sort of broad satire (with transgender references that are so in vogue right now), you might have something that could draw interest. Also, no need to mention the character names.

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      jfs15 says
      June 10, 2015, 2:34 pm
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      As interesting as this sounds, it still needs to be put into a more colorful form. “A young couple surgically exchange sex organs to understand each other when love is not enough to save their marriage.”

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