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When coming face-to-face with the unknown serial killer he has been pursuing for months, Detective Devaroe must make the decision of his life, kill or be killed. Can he do it if the killer is the love of his life?

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      Jesusglira says
      May 17, 2017, 5:48 pm
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      Has potential.

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      ab297 says
      May 5, 2017, 2:13 am
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      Great potential.

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      March 14, 2017, 2:55 pm
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      pretty good idea, like the concept

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    4. March 8, 2017, 1:15 pm
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      This is good, snappy marketing copy. Usually I leave out proper names and opt instead for a description of the protagonist though.

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    5. March 8, 2017, 2:25 am
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      Very good twist having the killer be the love of the character’s life

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    6. March 5, 2017, 12:09 am
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      Would probably lose the word unknown. If it is an unknown serial killer, then how does he know that he is facing that decision. Great story concept though, and I look forward to hearing more about it.

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      Gue-Nude says
      January 13, 2017, 9:40 pm
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      nice

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      geeart1 says
      December 21, 2016, 9:27 pm
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      Hooked!

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      Xaleber says
      December 10, 2016, 9:18 am
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      Amazing! With the right direction and cast, this may turn out to be a classic neo-noir film.

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      donell00 says
      November 17, 2016, 5:49 pm
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      I love movies like this, so I’m hooked.

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      November 16, 2016, 11:54 pm

      I am really intrigued by this idea and would love to know the entire story.

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      leontl1 says
      November 16, 2016, 6:50 pm

      Obviously I meant ‘Moe’ “I’d love to hear Moe”

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      leontl1 says
      November 16, 2016, 6:45 pm
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      Great potential, would love to hear ore.

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    14. Joker2008 says
      November 13, 2016, 3:40 pm
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      Value and has potential to make great crime thriller movie

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      November 13, 2016, 3:23 pm
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      This sounds so interesting. Totally hooked on this story!

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      November 12, 2016, 2:00 am
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      Excellent hook! Are you in the middle of writing it or just beginning? I hope so because I’d love to read this.

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    17. November 6, 2016, 6:11 pm
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      Very important thriller with a suspenseful twist.

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