Reflections
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Reflections

Revenge breeds murder. A forensic pathologist unveils a terrorizing secret that puts her life in peril; in the path of a serial killer and marks her as the chief suspect.

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    1. Mary says
      September 11, 2017, 10:34 pm
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      I think it’s amazing

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      dogma109 says
      September 27, 2016, 7:05 pm
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      I like the “Revenge breeds murder”. You might consider making that the title. Like the conflict of your hook, in the path of a serial killer and making her chief suspect.

      One note, you may want to change up the wording a bit: “pathologist reveals a terrifying secret”.

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