Ravens
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Ravens

When a freighter carrying radioactive material collides with a fishing boat and contaminates the fish spilling out into the ocean, it is then consumed by Ravens who then viciously attack mankind.

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      says
      January 31, 2016, 9:32 pm
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      Mention of a protagonist, and his/her motivations would complete this log line.

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      September 7, 2015, 5:38 am
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      It has potential!

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    3. September 6, 2015, 9:57 pm
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      When it rains, it pours concept. It’s like the up to date verision of “The Birds” with a sci-fi twist.

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      marrow says
      August 11, 2015, 10:54 am
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      I love the concept

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