Quentin and Morris Go to a High End Shopping Market
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Rating: 3.6/5 (4 votes cast)

Quentin and Morris Go to a High End Shopping Market

When two bros visit a high end shopping market in search of high end women they leave with something even more important, friendship

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    1. leroysm says
      January 26, 2016, 4:06 pm
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      There are possibilities here. Probably some funny sight gags.

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    2. mikeyz says
      July 9, 2015, 10:42 am

      A lot can be extracted from the simplicity of this logline without giving away too much info — this is why I like this. The wording may not be perfect and I admit I was probably a bit taken-in by the premise in my 5 star review. Nevertheless, the idea that two fun-loving, slang-talkin’, hipster, young, boyz-from-the-hood street-types visiting this high-end shopping center and trying to schmooze rich, stuck-up women is pretty appealing. Kind of like a fish-out-of-water blended with a coming of age premise where ultimately the two ‘grow up’ and learn a great deal of themselves and of each other. As I said though, a good logline and premise is one thing — taking this to the next level of a cleverly written screenplay would be quite the challenge in my opinion!

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      July 9, 2015, 9:51 am
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      When two bros visit a high end shopping market in search of high end women, (= inciting incident) – (something happens to them; they have to solve a problem) [SO THEY CAN] leave with something even more important, friendship

      “I like it” Like what? I ask both of you: where’s the story?!

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    4. mikeyz says
      July 8, 2015, 2:16 pm
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      Title brought a big smile to my face! I would think some really smart dialogue would be required though to turn this fun premise into a full-length movie … but then again, the writers of Harold and Kumar were able to pull it off, right? Good luck to you.

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      nealwilson says
      May 9, 2015, 10:50 pm
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      I like it could work

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