Prodigal
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Prodigal

A young woman spends the night before chasing her wayward teenage sister through the party scene of Palm Beach, Florida.

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    1. August 27, 2017, 12:31 am
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      One sister making a lot of mistakes; and the other well behaved. It’s definitely a real life thing.
      Try to think about what makes your characters unique compared to similar stories.

      Why Palm Beach, and not Miami?

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      August 21, 2017, 10:05 am
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      Maybe you need to tell us a bit more about the story and what makes it different from all the other projects with the same concept already out there.

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      NStarling says
      August 12, 2017, 12:15 pm
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      I think there could be more room for description

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      Jessbing15 says
      July 25, 2017, 10:29 am

      This is my logline, the word ” before” is not meant to be there.

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