Probability
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Probability

A professional gambler comes face to face with his long buried past when his mentally
ill sister shows up after twenty years now needing his care.

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    1. recluse says
      September 8, 2016, 8:07 am
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      Very shallow Story line and plot

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    2. Novelist56 says
      January 29, 2016, 9:06 am
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      Is the gambler her father? That could be the reason she is mentally retarded.

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      November 20, 2015, 3:16 am
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      Needs more meet. Does this new change, help him overcome his gambling?

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    4. Profile photo of RutgerOosterhoff
      August 27, 2015, 12:54 pm
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      …”face to face with his long buried past… “What happens next? How does that affect him? That’s what we want to know through the logline. Do they both make each other stronger? Is there character grows?

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      August 20, 2015, 8:55 pm
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      I like it :)

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