Playing false
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Playing false

When Elizabeth (family physiologist searching the reasons of unfaithfulness) caught her husband with his young passion, she concluded she did not know about unfaithful relations anything and she could not practice as philologist any more. She decided investigate the problem of unfaithfulness “inside” and to understand how people decide to play false she began to flirt with her ex-schoolmate analyzing herself feelings and behavior.

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    1. March 8, 2017, 12:48 pm
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      I recommend to read about log line writing. It should be from 25 to 30 words long, show who your main character and antagonist are, the conflict and the what they need to do in order to overcome that issue.

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      January 22, 2015, 10:05 am
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      This is too confusing but a little more work on the logline to clear it up, this could be a good story.

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    3. toojazzy says
      December 31, 2014, 5:03 pm
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      This is more of a synopsis, rather than a 1-2 sentence LOG LINE. I am not sure what the project is because there are lots of moving parts. If you would like constructive feedback from your colleagues, please condense this to a log line.

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      1rainman1 says
      November 3, 2014, 10:15 am
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      I think this log line would read much better if it was condensed to one sentence.

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