Perfect Stepmum
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Perfect Stepmum

A socialite stepmum,attempted to bring her new family back together.While,lose hoped girl ,Bethany conduct a teenage party and are about to take step back from the family drama.

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    1. Mary says
      September 11, 2017, 11:02 pm
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      good

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      Daniel says
      November 26, 2016, 8:22 am
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      Hard to understand any of this logline.

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      says
      March 4, 2016, 4:59 pm
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      The idea is good. But you need to fix the grammar and spelling.

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      January 31, 2016, 10:30 pm
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      It starts great (1st line), but the rest is a mess.

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