Parallel Actions
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Parallel Actions

An African male university student discovers romance and kindness but he’s faced with the option of quitting a vicious gang or risk losing the truelove.

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    1. Profile photo of ChimaIdigo
      ChimaIdigo says
      September 12, 2017, 1:48 pm
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      This is something I would definitely watch. 5/5

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    2. Profile photo of qazifabiahoq02
      August 30, 2017, 11:56 pm
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      Would love to read the script!. Romance with a twist!

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      says
      August 21, 2017, 10:20 am
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      The conflict is there so the story has potential. Make his struggles a bit more distinct though as the trope love life vs job/family/else is a little bit cliché.

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      moonyuet says
      August 4, 2017, 1:10 pm
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      The story consists of the conflict that everyone needs to talk about. I would like to see this happened.

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    5. toojazzy says
      August 2, 2017, 4:37 pm

      Is he African or African American? Does it take place in an African Country, America or some place else. Is there an international criminal element to the gang life? Nothing really new about a guy having to choose between his girl and a gang/sports team or whatever. Isnt that life?

      Add an element of international intrigue (if that’s relevant), International police involvement MI-6, FBI, Mossad– escaping a hit by the gangs security team etc.

      An African student studying in New York, joins an international forgery gang to support his family back home, until he meets and falls for an ICE agent.

      Add some spice, danger, intrigue different than the boy meets girl.

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      Gue-Nude says
      August 1, 2017, 9:38 pm
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      Parallel choice and life

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      bbtatum says
      July 24, 2017, 2:39 pm
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      Good

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      Milan says
      July 12, 2017, 2:14 pm
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      great

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      June 28, 2017, 8:03 pm
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      Very good

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    10. Coolkareem says
      June 13, 2017, 9:05 am
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      The Logline of Parallel Actions introduces an intriguing conflict involving romance and good relationship between the embattle male student and his girlfriend. It’s really curious to know what transpired between him, his fellow gang and his girlfriend; is he going to obey his truelove and pull out of the gang? What do you think will happen to him if he dares make such decision? Truly, this will create a very serious conflict that only God knows how it will end up.
      Good movie idea with the contemporary subject-matter.
      I wish you all the best.

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    11. Echaka95 says
      June 5, 2017, 6:33 pm

      love, love, love!!! great compelling idea

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      June 2, 2017, 8:46 am
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      I think making it an African University student makes it interesting. Nice

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      May 31, 2017, 4:36 am
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      YASSSSS love a tough boy love story takeover idea

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      May 28, 2017, 5:29 am
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      Now I like this because it as A an African AMerican Male in college. Keep going dude.

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