Ostrich and palm
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Ostrich and palm

Once upon a time a village girl gets a chance to live by a famous pop singer who is a twin.

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    1. Profile photo of bellowriter
      May 13, 2017, 6:11 am
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      No hook in here

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    2. ebabe says
      November 1, 2015, 3:59 pm
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      Have no idea what this log line is saying.

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      Donn says
      July 2, 2015, 4:00 pm
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      needs some work. “Once Upon a time” sounds like a fairytale, like Princess Bride. If that’s the tone, then great. Otherwise, you may want to reword that.

      Also a village girl will “live by” a famous pop singer, meaning she will live in the same neighborhood, or house?

      If these were twins separated at birth, then it needs to state that in the logline. But if that is that case, its a pretty cliched storyline.

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