Orpheus Star
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Orpheus Star

A suicidal young musician tries to make peace with his troubled childhood by traveling home to care for his estranged preacher grandmother who is being haunted by a dangerous, vengeful spirit.

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    1. Dartistman says
      January 23, 2016, 9:05 am
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      It sounds a bit contradicting

      I got that he wants to make peace with his childhood

      but now he has to go save his grandmother from being killed and most likely the way to do that is he will sacrifice himself.

      He’s already suicidal and you send him to a place that wants to kill

      Are you trying to scare the boy enough to regret the attempts he made on his life.
      If so I thought that was already established when you said he wants to make peace with his troubled childhood past

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    2. ebabe says
      November 1, 2015, 3:58 pm
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      I was okay till I got to the “dangerous, vengeful spirit.”

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      marrow says
      August 11, 2015, 10:43 am
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      Like it!

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    4. orenweitz says
      July 4, 2015, 6:44 am
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      sounds promising, not sure I’d go to the theater to see it.

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      July 3, 2015, 8:01 am
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      I’m not swept away but not bad, not bad at all.

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      Donn says
      July 2, 2015, 4:13 pm
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      Love it!

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