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OBSESSION WITH AN OLDER WOMAN

This is the story of Jack Hinckley’s obsession with an older woman (Marian Thatcher). Jack is a seventeen year old high school graduate who gets hired by the Thatcher family but in the process falls madly in love with Marian Thatcher and due to circumstances tries to murder her. Will Jack be able to murder her and destroy a family?

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  1. Profile photo of adnanelaala
    September 19, 2017, 8:09 pm
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    I think the story and concept really worth it ! Well done

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    May 31, 2017, 4:39 am
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    This is like the graduate with an unexpected turn because he wants to kill her instead. I like killing for love

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    • Divvij says
      May 31, 2017, 11:28 am

      Thank you Sarah for rating my feature.
      – Divij

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    ab297 says
    May 5, 2017, 2:14 am
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    Nice one

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  4. Divvij says
    April 2, 2017, 5:39 am
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    It is well written and it is a unique concept.

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  5. amog9099 says
    March 28, 2017, 11:21 am
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    Nice concept

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