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Nymphs: Life of the Sea

It’s 1717 and the notorious pirate Black Beard and his crew of cutthroats terrorize the Caribbean Sea and the Mermaids who are on the brink of extinction, the newly Royal Navy Captain of the HMS Vancouver and his crew of misfits stops Black Beard and save the Mermaid species.

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  1. December 17, 2017, 10:30 pm
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    This was excellent! A few grammatical errors/misspellings here and there. But this just became my favorite script on here. Don’t change a thing.

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      December 28, 2017, 9:01 pm

      Hey SplitLocked,

      Thanks again for your reply and rating. The corrections have been made and was able to edit the script down to 122 pages but I will keep the current script on this site because I like the longer version better and new writers can learn from it.

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    December 17, 2017, 7:56 pm
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    I have gotten good reviews from other screenplay contests such as Blue Cat Screenplay Competition, The Golden Script Competition, Feel the Reel International Film Festival, Cannes Screenplay Competition and others, thanks!
    Too bad I cannot post them on this site. I hope you all enjoy!

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