Number 10
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Number 10

A young reporter starts investigating corruption in British government, how media is used and how scandals are hidden from society and how the rich influence the minsters and law. The question is will he go against his judgement and bow down and cover the dirt for the cabinet or will he expose the lies and dirt?

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    1. Profile photo of aaronroankramer@gmail.com
      September 29, 2016, 10:51 am
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      Excellent idea, but I think you could polish the logline. The first sentence has “how… and how… and how…”

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      says
      May 5, 2016, 12:22 am
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      I like the concept, although be careful. The logline is supposed to be a pitch…imagine that you only have five seconds to sell your idea to producers and/or directors. Unless you talk really fast, your logline looks like it would take longer than five seconds to sell it.

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    3. March 11, 2016, 10:37 am
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      you’d better pick a different place for your story. Britain, I don’t think so.

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        May 5, 2016, 12:20 am

        Well, considering it is a feature film and not a documentary, the author has a right to place the story wherever they want. It is your opinion and that is fine, for me though I think the author can pick whatever place they want, and only change it by their own accord.

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      marrow says
      August 11, 2015, 10:53 am
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      Good concept

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