No More F***!!
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No More F***!!

” I Wish that our Neighborhood could live without the F*** word”.. little Beautiful Laila makes this wish near Christmas and IO!! It happens Literally !!! A Curse Will Hit The Town.

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    1. March 5, 2017, 12:18 am
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      Great concept. So many similar stories about kids making wishes. Consider your base audience, if it is designed to be a kids show, vs adults. With the adult audience, many of us have seen the Christmas wishes thing. Have a compelling and unique twist, if that is the case.

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      Xaleber says
      December 10, 2016, 9:32 am
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      Pretty good.

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      vp81955 says
      April 22, 2016, 2:05 pm
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      This also could be converted into an “urban” setting, where a woman tired of the vocabulary successfully wishes her neighborhood could be rid of the “n” and “m-f” words (and the latter doesn’t refer to Monday-Friday). That premise could be both fun and culturally challenging.

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      November 20, 2015, 3:21 am
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      It’s not a logline, but it could make a great children’s story. Revise the logline.

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    5. JCMercer says
      September 1, 2015, 9:41 pm
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      I agree, it’s not a logline. However, I do understand somebody makes a wish and it comes true. Keep trying:)

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      MarsAlien says
      August 13, 2015, 5:27 am
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      Well, that’s not a logline. So I have no idea what this is about.

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      August 12, 2015, 6:16 pm
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      I’t not a solid logline but it has impact…

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