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NIGHTMARES

A mother’s concern over her son’s behavior quickly becomes the stuff of nightmares.

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    MikeArrani says
    January 16, 2018, 8:15 am
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    Although, the concept is not very original, everything else is handled masterfully! It’s your classic setup and punchline kind of a short story. I think it could be much scarier though, if the ‘monster’ wasn’t shown, or was only shown vaguely, maybe as a silhouette.

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