Lookin’ Up
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Lookin’ Up

A mild-mannered, law-abiding citizen decides to murder his parasitic family in order to become a media celebrity. He hires and pays a hit man not once but twice. Once to do the job and once to call it off. Through a freak accident, three of his family are killed. He’s innocent but takes credit for the crimes, because he wants to get on television..

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  1. aweiss says
    August 16, 2013, 2:59 am
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    I only found the first 25 pages of this screenplay here, so it’s rather hard to evaluate this script. But what i did read, it’s a little too quirky to be believed, even as the concept is good, and I did want to read the rest of the script. The characters and dialog need work, a little too on the nose dialog wise,and the characters seem like sketches. But with more details and a little more subtext, both could work fine. Keep at it, this has potential.

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