Lemon Aid
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Lemon Aid

Three gullible friends hoping to save a used car lot from going belly up are oblivious to the fact the vehicle they purchased from there is a lemon.

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      Jessbing15 says
      July 25, 2017, 10:32 am
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      This would definitely work as a short but i’m not sure how much character development there could be.

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