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Rating: 4.3/5 (3 votes cast)

Lawn Boys

A washed-up city guy must become a champion of nature and lead a crew of misfit landscapers when a scheming artificial turf dealer sets up shop in his hometown.

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  1. August 31, 2016, 10:36 pm
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    Great first half and ending, but drags after Tad.
    The humour disappears about half way through, only returning in the contest.
    Sunny’s son Kyle also disappears half way, never to return (except “Their kids look bored”? ).
    Steve makes no attempt to explain the breakup-causing underpants or contact Sunny, making their happy reunion after a long gap a bit sudden.
    The gardening crew alternate between being vulgar dudes, cool hipsters and hugging/crying sensitive new age guys holding hands (Bravo if you’re pushing the envelope, but may be confusing).
    Steve loses his glasses near the beginning, but has no spares and never wears glasses again until the end.
    Overall though, an amusing ride.
    It just needs more coherence in the male crew (maybe one is a SNAG, one a hipster, one a vulgar dude) and some more loopy humour (love the crop circle) between meeting Tad and the contest.

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    April 3, 2016, 2:30 am
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    Overall good Adam Sandler style movie,
    Could do with some Comedy or Lovey-Dovey bits..

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    • April 3, 2016, 1:51 pm

      Thanks for reading and the rating, but come on! Where are you seeing a lack of comedy and any grammatical shortcomings?

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  3. February 29, 2016, 6:43 pm
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    This is my work and I approve this rating :^}

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