The Shyster
An orphan is taken in by a gang of criminals in Northeast Philly and grows up to lead them in a turf war with the Russian Maf...
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A young bronc rider sick of playing second fiddle to the flashy bull riders creates a new level of excitement and danger for his sport by attaching an extra appendage to the head of his steed.
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Narrow potential audience (rodeo) could make this a tough sell.
An attempt at originality is recognized, but I’m not confident there’s anything here for a movie with sustainable interest or a good payoff.
Sounds like enough material for an SNL sketch.
Again, as a kids movie this could be cute.
If done as a kids movie, I think this could work.
A horrid idea to be honest.
Um…no.
I’m not sure if this would turn out to be funny…needs a bit more work.
Pull out a little more than a seeming gimic. Build on the character element perhaps?
Where’s the interesting story? So what?
I think you might need to rework this. 8 Seconds wasn’t really a comedy, but there’s promise here if you focus on the funny!
“Dr. Dolittle” on steroids? Is “bronc” short for “bronco”? Good thing it’s a comedy, or supposed to be. I just don’t see how he’d have an advantage competing if he’s not even allowed to, what with the added appendage.
Not seeing a movie here just the gimmick. Needs more.
I feel like this character would work well as a supporting part in a greater story about rodeos, but as an individual there’s nothing to keep an audience going for that long.
I don’t think there is enough in this logline to grab my attention. It’s an interesting concept but just not interesting enough. It’s not for me.
Sounds a bit trite and there’s nowhere to go after the central conceit. Does he try to sell the horse as a genuine unicorn?
Honestly, kids may like the unicorn bit, but there’s nothing more to it than that.
I think you may be right about that.