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King of the Unicorn Rodeo
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King of the Unicorn Rodeo

A young bronc rider sick of playing second fiddle to the flashy bull riders creates a new level of excitement and danger for his sport by attaching an extra appendage to the head of his steed.

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  1. Avatar of Double-Bogey
    March 7, 2013, 10:08 pm
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    Narrow potential audience (rodeo) could make this a tough sell.

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  2. Doboro says
    January 9, 2013, 9:24 am
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    An attempt at originality is recognized, but I’m not confident there’s anything here for a movie with sustainable interest or a good payoff.

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  3. December 11, 2012, 12:18 am
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    Sounds like enough material for an SNL sketch.

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    chalkyc says
    November 3, 2012, 7:36 am
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    Again, as a kids movie this could be cute.

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    bsouls4 says
    October 31, 2012, 11:44 pm
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    If done as a kids movie, I think this could work.

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    says
    September 16, 2012, 6:01 pm

    A horrid idea to be honest.

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  7. gregorj says
    August 31, 2012, 4:49 pm
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    Um…no.

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  8. July 5, 2012, 3:17 pm
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    I’m not sure if this would turn out to be funny…needs a bit more work.

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    tserlin says
    June 22, 2012, 2:14 pm
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    Pull out a little more than a seeming gimic. Build on the character element perhaps?

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    says
    May 17, 2012, 3:01 pm
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    Where’s the interesting story? So what?

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  11. rffischer says
    May 15, 2012, 9:56 pm
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    I think you might need to rework this. 8 Seconds wasn’t really a comedy, but there’s promise here if you focus on the funny!

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    seanery7 says
    May 13, 2012, 8:41 pm
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    “Dr. Dolittle” on steroids? Is “bronc” short for “bronco”? Good thing it’s a comedy, or supposed to be. I just don’t see how he’d have an advantage competing if he’s not even allowed to, what with the added appendage.

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  13. cynosurer says
    May 8, 2012, 10:27 pm
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    Not seeing a movie here just the gimmick. Needs more.

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    ckmoak says
    May 8, 2012, 2:26 pm
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    I feel like this character would work well as a supporting part in a greater story about rodeos, but as an individual there’s nothing to keep an audience going for that long.

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  15. joyhorror says
    May 7, 2012, 11:32 am
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    I don’t think there is enough in this logline to grab my attention. It’s an interesting concept but just not interesting enough. It’s not for me.

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    sinnington says
    April 24, 2012, 8:46 am
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    Sounds a bit trite and there’s nowhere to go after the central conceit. Does he try to sell the horse as a genuine unicorn?

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  17. cacsanders says
    March 30, 2012, 3:55 am
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    Honestly, kids may like the unicorn bit, but there’s nothing more to it than that.

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      tserlin says
      June 29, 2012, 8:39 pm

      I think you may be right about that.

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