Kalyann
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Kalyann

A kick-ass female bounty hunter holds a bar full of gangsters hostage in order to trap a fugitive. But one of the hostages is there to meet his future self: a time-travelling killer whose arrival is imminent.

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      January 31, 2016, 9:49 pm
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      Again, there’s a disconnect between the two elements.

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      November 20, 2015, 3:24 am
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      The logline does not do the story justice. How do both elements connect? Revise. Not bad though.

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    3. September 6, 2015, 9:41 pm
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      Sounds like a good story. Just need to somehow connect the two different plots to make it one smooth plot.

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