Je suis Charlie
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Je suis Charlie

French Revolution’s executioner Charlie Henry Sanson receives Nostradamus’s prophecy – serve France again and die when Freedom counts 30.
Sanson views nowadays. Encounters terrorist in Paris. Terrorist forgets cautions, approaches Sanson’s image in the mirror. Sanson introduces himself: “Je suis Charlie”, sniper kills terrorist. It was Sanson’s last execution. Prophecy fulfils, when he dies 04/July/1806

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      February 5, 2015, 9:00 am
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      jumpy logline, incomplete run-on sentences, don’t get the storyline, good luck!

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