Ivee
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Ivee

In this psychedelic, horror coming of age story, wild teen Ivee is thrown into a whirlwind cocktail of drugs, mystery and magic after inadvertently killing her mother which inevitably turns those once closest to Ivee wanting her dead.

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    1. recluse says
      September 8, 2016, 8:04 am
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      low budget idea

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    2. pastortim says
      December 6, 2015, 6:12 am
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      The content has a potential, but needs to be brushed. Revisit and get clear picture of what you want your story to be. If the script is finished, reread and rewrite so as to get clear concept and good character development.

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    3. Chidi says
      June 5, 2015, 9:02 pm
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      In this psychedelic, horror coming of age story, wild teen Ivee is thrown into a whirlwind cocktail of drugs, mystery and magic after inadvertently killing her mother which inevitably turns those once closest to Ivee wanting her dead.

      I think this logline is of reasonable length, but could be more creative for a better understanding of the story. Maybe it could start off as…
      “After wild teen Ivee is thrown into a whirlwind cocktail of drugs…” then move on to tell us “she must overcome/defeat/save/whatever” then bring in the antagonist force, “despite a…/(since it has to do with magic bring in the “demons/monsters”).

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      SeanKeyter says
      May 12, 2015, 7:45 am
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      Would like to read more

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      pphomme says
      February 7, 2015, 10:35 pm
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      After accidentally, killing her mother, a wild teen throws herself into a lifestyle of drugs, wild parties and magic but somebody close to her knows what she did and wants her dead.

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      January 21, 2015, 8:34 am
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      I think the logline more work.

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      says
      January 20, 2015, 9:05 am
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      Has potential. Good luck!

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      January 18, 2015, 8:48 pm
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      Very intriguing

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