Isobel
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Isobel

A heartfelt drama in which a young woman is reunited with her mother whom she believed to be dead. She embarks on both a physical and emotional journey as she meets the family she didn’t know she had and uncovers the painful truth about her mother and is faced with some difficult decisions that will change all of their lives forever. The result is a poignant bittersweet tale of family, love, and self discovery.

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    April 5, 2016, 10:53 am

    I only read the logline, but if it is unique enough from other’s on the same theme, and well writen, it would hold my attention. Placing huge decisions like that on children is always an interesting topic to me.

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    leeoconnor says
    September 22, 2014, 8:36 am
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    Hi Carley,

    I’ve only had time to read the first ten pages, But what a wonderful story, well written and it beautifully flows.
    The CUT TO: Isn’t necessary on the first page though so I would suggest getting rid of that.
    A story that pulls on the heart strings indeed, Good character base and dialogue. I already feel sympathetic toward Bella.

    Nice work.

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