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Intensive Supervision

An Army veteran resiliently pursues a career as an inner city probation/parole officer despite having to face daily hostility and legal turmoil. (Revision: September 11, 2012)

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    drcyclops says
    August 13, 2012, 1:23 am
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    Dialogue needs work. Avoid the “talking head” trap. Story is to long and cumbersome. Consider some rewrite on the action as well. Character are too shallow.

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  2. rickemg says
    July 21, 2012, 10:19 am
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    I thought that the story droned on and on. The dialogue was on the nose and the characters lacked any depth. Sometimes Marks dialogue sounded like a ex-military man and other times like he’s from the hood. Lots of misplaced words and spelling errors.

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